Voice over improvment
From my audience feedback, i found that a lot of the comments were critical of my orginal voice over that it does not fit to the pictures shown on the screen and the female voice did not fit to my audience, so i decided to make some improvments and change my audience and content within the documentary.
Audience- mixed audience, from families to couples to attract them to come to the races and learn the facts about Beverley racecourse and flat racing itself but mainly what a day at the races consists of.
For my voice over to fit my audience i decided to go from a female voice to a male voice as i wanted to portray a professional feel to it, as it is a prodominantly male industry.
I cut out the facts about betting in my voice over and mainly focused on what a day at the races involves and what Beverley racecourse itself has to offer, looking at why the races is so popular.
